13 June 2019

composition



3 comments:

  1. here's a first draft for this one--

    You see the art pipes
    on the right
    I don't have a permit
    for them
    but they're not against the law,
    not exactly
    The state does get upset by them,
    now and then

    They were not here when
    I moved in
    I installed them myself

    Has my landlord seen them?
    No

    But I did write "artist"
    on the "occupation" line
    of my lease application
    So

    The art pipes are connected
    to the world
    but past the ceiling the connection
    does not show

    It takes more than the pipes
    of course
    Easel and canvas and time
    and work

    You can already see yourself
    in my window
    and after I use what comes through
    the art pipes
    you will see something new

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    1. love this <3 <3
      and here we can see clearly your "me voice" talking!
      when i read it in my comment section it was displayed as a long text, no spaces between lines, it felt exactly like ramblings i could make when talking to myself believing i was talking to someone.
      proof of that: "you can already see yourself in my window"
      i am a little confused now, who am i, who are you? :P

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  2. yes and who is writing all these poems? :P

    <3 <3

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