gorgeous - nice work!
thanks, one of my favorites <3
ran another errand, wrote another poem :-DAs soul wants bodyand body soul,shadow wants a place a falland painted steelto be that placeShadow is alreadyan absenceand soon to be even less,but the steelis also passing awayYet for a moment they are togetherforever
that should be "a place to fall" in line four!
:whisper: i knew :)how sweet, like the image.btw, i wanted to call it "almost absent" i don't know why i changed my mind.and you knew it!!
it's surprising how much you and i think alike and not surprising at the same time! thanks <3 <3
yes still amazes me after all this time!that's what being best friends is, i guess.lol, you're my BFF :P
lol :P <3
gorgeous - nice work!
ReplyDeletethanks, one of my favorites <3
Deleteran another errand, wrote another poem :-D
ReplyDeleteAs soul wants body
and body soul,
shadow wants
a place a fall
and painted steel
to be that place
Shadow is already
an absence
and soon to be even less,
but the steel
is also passing away
Yet for a moment
they are together
forever
that should be "a place to fall" in line four!
ReplyDelete:whisper: i knew :)
Deletehow sweet, like the image.
btw, i wanted to call it "almost absent" i don't know why i changed my mind.and you knew it!!
it's surprising how much you and i think alike and not surprising at the same time! thanks <3 <3
Deleteyes still amazes me after all this time!
Deletethat's what being best friends is, i guess.
lol, you're my BFF :P
lol :P <3
ReplyDelete