Means he may be bad at communication ,but artistic , with , or without the intent of course , but can it be said he's without intent , since he made it ?
I was walking with my friend the poet, we were talking and taking pictures. We stopped to look at metal and rust, old paint layered, dripped and weathered. As by an abstract expressionist but then again not, for it was clear no artist's hand had been here. Seeing it as something worth being seen made us the artists, made me the artist as I shot it with my phone. But there were letters, there had been a hand here with intent to be known. My friend asked what was written. "Burned house...or damaged house," I told him, "But the letters are wrong, they have no dots." "That's the damage," he said, "the dots went up in smoke when the house burned." I laughed. "I doubt the writer had your craft."
Much artistic , but double :pd:
ReplyDeletewhat do you mean?
DeleteMeans he may be bad at communication ,but artistic , with , or without the intent of course , but can it be said he's without intent , since he made it ?
Deletei'm sure he didn't make anything else but write the words :D
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ReplyDeletegorgeous picture though! :-D
maybe the poet on your staff will be able to do something with this :-D
ReplyDeletehe's overworked and underpaid! well, not paid at all, but that's just a technicality :)
Deletelol <3
Deleteas usual - first draft!
ReplyDeleteI was walking with my friend the poet,
we were talking and taking pictures.
We stopped to look at metal and rust,
old paint layered, dripped and weathered.
As by an abstract expressionist
but then again not, for it was clear
no artist's hand had been here.
Seeing it as something worth being
seen made us the artists, made me
the artist as I shot it with my phone.
But there were letters, there had been
a hand here with intent to be known.
My friend asked what was written.
"Burned house...or damaged house,"
I told him, "But the letters are wrong,
they have no dots." "That's the damage,"
he said, "the dots went up in smoke
when the house burned." I laughed.
"I doubt the writer had your craft."
i can just picture it!
Deleteand Richard, this is taking the your voice / my voice to the next level :))
yes! i was thinking about the voice thing when i had the idea for this. wasn't sure it would work, i think it did, it was fun :D
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